I'm not putting "range" ammo in my bug out stuff. I keep the good stuff (Speer Gold Dot, M855, amd LE 12 guage buck) in my bug out gear. It's not going to do me any good in my gun safe if I'm bugging out.
He mentioned Toilet Paper, but I didn't see any in his gear.
No mention of Duct/100 mph tape. Definitely need that.
He has a tool box w/ tools, and even mentioned an oil wrench, but I didn't see any spare liquids or an oil filter. I'd definitely have some anti freeze, some oil, and windshield washer fluid.